Hurricane Florence Alerts Should Be Clearer

Hurricane Florence Advisory #44

National Hurricane Center  

Advisory 44

Taken From (9/10/18) http://weather.gov/twitter 

The “primary official Twitter account for the National Hurricane Center, focusing on the Atlantic basin. 

When I unpack the language, focusing on the interested general public as the reader: 

What I come up with: 

The risk to life and property from Hurricane Florence is increasing. The risk comes from damaging hurricane force winds and prolonged (long lasting) rainfall inland.

•        Storm surge at the coast
•        Freshwater flooding

It is too soon to determine (know) the exact timing, location and strength of the hurricane.  Everyone at the coast and inland South Carolina into the mid- Atlantic region should closely monitor (watch) Florence’s progress.  Ensure they have their hurricane plan ready and follow any advice local officials give you.   

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Any other ideas for a basic language template for these types of alerts? 

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