Health literacy is in the cracks

Here's  an example of a fairly simple sentence that isn’t so simple unless you have the needed, underlying health literacy - health concept.

Excerpt from Washington State Dept. of Health (2-17-19)

If you have been exposed to measles and feel ill, stay home to help prevent the spread of the disease. Call your healthcare provider to ask about testing and advice. If you don’t have a healthcare provider, call your local health department. If you need help with getting access to health care, call the Family Health Hotline at 1-800-322-2588.

Let’s focus on the seemingly easy to read sentence:

If you have been exposed to measles and feel ill, stay home to help prevent the spread of the disease.

When you unpack the sentence you get:

1.    You have been exposed to measles.

2.    You feel ill.

3.    Stay home.

4.     Staying home will help prevent the disease from spreading.

This text (sentence/message) assumes a specific health literacy that the reader may not have.  The text assumes the reader knows the relationship between staying home and spreading a disease. The needed health literacy is found in the cracks - the small connective tissue  (phrases & clauses) of the sentence. In other words the reader has to know that measles is contagious and if you go to a provider waiting room (doctor, emergency room, clinic), you can spread the disease.

Try This 

     

If you have been exposed to measles and feel ill, stay home and call your provider.  If you go directly to your provider you can spread measles in the waiting room. Stay home, call your provider and you can help stop the spread of measles.

To watch a short educational video on "unpacking sentences" visit my website
Healthliteracylab.com  for a library of free lessons

"Unpacking Sentences" 
http://healthliteracylab.com/healthliteracy/lesson/unpacking-sentences-1/

Hurricane Florence Alerts Should Be Clearer

Hurricane Florence Advisory #44

National Hurricane Center  

Advisory 44

Taken From (9/10/18) http://weather.gov/twitter 

The “primary official Twitter account for the National Hurricane Center, focusing on the Atlantic basin. 

When I unpack the language, focusing on the interested general public as the reader: 

What I come up with: 

The risk to life and property from Hurricane Florence is increasing. The risk comes from damaging hurricane force winds and prolonged (long lasting) rainfall inland.

•        Storm surge at the coast
•        Freshwater flooding

It is too soon to determine (know) the exact timing, location and strength of the hurricane.  Everyone at the coast and inland South Carolina into the mid- Atlantic region should closely monitor (watch) Florence’s progress.  Ensure they have their hurricane plan ready and follow any advice local officials give you.   

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Any other ideas for a basic language template for these types of alerts? 

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